"Beep, beep. Beep, beep."
Her alarm clock.
"Beep!"
She looked like she hadn't slept enough-- was smiling into the pillow fluff. I leaned against the window-frame and stared at her with little shame. The sun was bouncing off the wall and jumping up and down like a ball; it bounced right over the bed too and onto the carpet, which was blue. A hue which I found quite delightful, and made me think of muffins and trifle, and also of October rain and other things I couldn't explain like--
"Beep!"
"Ohhhh," she mumbled, throwing her clock right at the door. I watched it fall onto the floor; The little-hand pointing at two, the big-hand not sure what to do.
"Shut up" she whined, "just a minute more."
The beeping stopped, stopped it did. That clock became an invalid. Rain poured up the walls around her; that clock got wetter by the hour. Little-hand twirled 'round like a flower; Big hand just laid there, enjoying the shower.
No sounds of clocks, no sounds at all; surely she should soundly fall inside a dream and jump back out quite happily, I thought.
"Don't shout!"
Startled by the sudden scare, I looked at her; she was right there giving me an annoyed glare at the window where I'd stood, to peek at her because I could. I thought I'd kept right out of sight, I thought I'd not get such a fright!
"You see me?" I asked with a sheepish smile.
"Yes" she sighed, "But it's alright. You just don't realize what's going on yet. Just make the most of this--it looks like you're another lucid dreamer."
Oh dear, she sounded so mechanic! "One fish two fish red fish blue fish!" I yelled in a sudden panic.
She grinned and glanced down at the floor, the sun was swimming through the rainstorm; I lifted both my feet in the air and looked for fish that were not there; the sun had already splashed away and found another game to play.
"You'll have to hurry up!" she cried and offered me a dewberry pie. "And what am I to do with this?!" I looked at it, oblivious.
Little-hand tapped impatiently; big-hand giggled playfully. This was not good, not good at all!
She pointed towards the opposite wall. a picture of me was about to fall. "You need to make your portrait smile, otherwise, we'll be--"
"Here for a while!" I nodded at her frantically.
Just as I thought I'd seen enough I thought my way to more weird stuff; Oh! the thinks that we can think with heads jam-packed with jelly and pink! To my surprise I realized, the bed was melting before my eyes! She swiped a hand against the covers--I was so scared I started to stutter.
"Dont' be afraid! It's only butter!"
So with butter and dewberry pie I ran--
"Throw them at you as hard as you can!"
I did and as I saw them splatter against the picture frame, which shattered, I understood how much this mattered; Little-hand cheered, loud and high, big-hand waved a friendly goodbye. Inside, outside, upside down, I could not let my picture frown! I jumped and screamed "Please! don't be sad!"
And suddenly, nothing.
No pie in my hand, no rain in my shoes. The morning hues glared through the blinds and I blinked my eyes. Brushing blue fluff off my knees I looked back up and found myself outside the window frame again. I peeked in one last time, and sitting there, in the sunlight, was my alarm clock, silent and still. Little-hand and big-hand. I smiled at will.
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Comments
It is extremely smooth and fluid. You have an exquisite mind. Jen
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It's that terrifying place where loneliness itself will make her forget how to smile...
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Brain tingles ftw
Startled by the sudden scare, I looked at her; she was right there giving me an annoyed glare at the window where I'd stood to peek at her because I could. I thought I'd kept right out of sight, I thought I'd not get such a fright! - loved the playfulness potrayed.
"One fish two fish red fish blue fish!" love this whimiscal, nonsensical, dream-talk.
Read it twice and it' I only appreciate how I like this on the second attempt.
A light-hearted, funny, whimiscal piece like Dr Seuss himself. I bellieved you have protayed him well in the sense of magic realism.
The unexpected rain, flood in the girl's room, the potrait, the clock all works nicely and in the end we are left with a dream/sleep that we wished we have slept just a bit longer, like her.
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Art lives from constraints and dies from freedom. (Leonardo da Vinci)
im so glad you thought it was playful, i was worried that it hadnt come through.. i've poked several Dr.Seuss titles into this piece and i'm glad you liked how i tried to make them work in my own context
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Brain tingles ftw
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